Here's my redone first page of Orpheus! This one actually got finished! I'm still not sure it completely works though... I'm afraid people will think the background characters are ghosts since it's a funeral but they are not! I was just trying something different with the style. If I could I'd go back and redo pages 2 and make all the people look like this so that I can really get across the feeling of Seperation he feels from every other living person... perhaps I will if this book gets a Xeric or like Dark Horse wants to publish it or somfin... hmmm... What do you guys think?

Also... Now everyone can see how Orpheus was ment to begin! With this opening page!! And yes in my story Euridice was 16 when she died. They were engaged and her parents gave their conscent for the marriage, so it was legal.... uh just FYI I guess.